Hi there.
Here my take.
Wait and see for your feedback.
Have a nice day
Monica Gheorghevici
Aug 12 2023, 11:57 AM
Hi Manu!
Overall, your take sounds good. There are just a few details that stop me from giving you a very high grade.
The first thing that I would like to hear in your take, is a better separation of the notes. You don't play all the notes perfectly clearly.
At 0:07 and 0:15 we can't hear the C# played (D string/ fret 11). You need to add more force to your pinky finger to make that hammer-on audible. Also, when you start the arpeggio and you execute the slide, accentuate the A note. Don't move your finger from that note so fast because it will stop sounding as it should.
You did a great job and I enjoyed your take. You get an 8 from me.
Keep up your amazing work!
Kristofer Dahl
Aug 15 2023, 09:41 AM
Nice!
Monica is spot on about note separation here.
It's worth considering that if you opt for a clean but more compressed sound - thing will get easier than with a somewhat distorted sound. However I would still recommend getting the proper technique down so you can work with any type of sound.
With a clean AND uncompressed sound note separation will obviously not be an issue at all - but then you are likely to get issues with the legato runs instead 😅
Those slides could also be a tad more in time with a somewhat audible glitch at 00:04
You get an 8 from me - keep up the amazing work mate 👌
Fran
Mar 28 2024, 04:17 PM
Pass: 8
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