Hi Tim, good to see you working hard and pushing yourself towards improvement, as always.
Ok, this lesson is a tough one - even for experienced guitarists. I challenge anyone to play it as good as Max.
Firstly, your pitch control needs work during your bending. One way of doing this is to fret and then play the note you will bend to, and then bend to it. For example, if you're bending a whole tone then first fret that note two frets above and then bend to that note from two frets below. You can do this with any interval. This will train both your hands and your ear at the same time.
Secondly, you need to be able to add vibrato successfully to your bending. I can see you made the effort to do this but what you're doing is just moving the neck in your hands without actually affecting the strings. Have a look at this lesson of mine which focuses on vibrato on bends.
http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Bens-Vibrato-Odyssey-3/However, in order for you to be able to make that lesson work you may need to take a look at this one
http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Bens-Vibrato-Odyssey-5/I hope this helps. Happy new year!