Hi Rhida, good job with this lesson.
I can say that your rhythm skills and your chord changes are becoming better comparing this new take with the previous one. However there is still room to improve different things on this one:
- Right hand rhythm: It's better but it's still a bit rigid. Practice trying to give the rhythm a groovier and more dynamic feel. Play along with the original lesson to get it.
- Chords sound: As the guys said, some of the chords are not sounding complete, there are some muted notes. Check this from time to time playing each note of the chord separated to be sure that it's sounding and that it's not being muted.
- Chord changes: The transition between chords it's getting better but this is something that you still need to improve. When you are playing chords, it's a good trick to visualize the next chord to be played a bit before the change. Try it.
Finally, I notice that your guitar is not perfectly tuned on this take. Remember to check it before recording a take.
That's all friend, keep on the hard work!