Hi Phil, this is good playing, man. There won't be any ripping up here !
You've misinterpreted the timing of some of the notes is all. You're not actually out of time.
This probably won't make any sense to you but I'll explain it anyway... your playing the first 2 notes of every group as 8th notes. But they're supposed to be dotted 8th notes, which means they have an extra duration on them of an added 16th note. I know, it's all nonsense isn't it ?!!
Best thing to do is listen to the original again (I know, we always say that). Bear hangs on those notes for a bit longer. If you counted 1 , 2 , 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4 over every bar (ie. you should be able to fit 2 counts of 4 over each chord change) when the first notes happen the second note should sound just after you count 2.
In your version you land exactly on the count of 2. So it's just a bit too early.
I hope it makes sense, I know it's confusing !