Hey mate!
Wow, looks like you have a very nice presentation for your video here
This piece is very demanding because it has a lot of details that need focus in order for it to stand out
Overall. you've got the structure, but there are phrases which are being rushed, bends which are not in pitch and the vibrato which is too fast and too aggressive. Please try to record over the original take, in order to notice the differences. Listen to the superposed recordings and then try to come up with a version that aims as much as possible towards the original feeling of the piece.
Keep rocking mate and I am looking forward to see the next take!
Cosmin