Darius Wave
Mar 5 2014, 11:53 AM
Very good job on this one. Somewhere in the middle there was a moment of hesitation and it miss some precission but overall it's very well prepared. I also had a feeling of very tiny tuning issue while you play those highest notes in the "melody guitar" track.
Cosmin Lupu
Mar 5 2014, 12:52 PM
Hey mate - I have nothing to add here aside what Darius already stated, so congrats on a nice take!
Keep rocking!
Cosmin
Gabriel Leopardi
Mar 5 2014, 02:26 PM
Hi mate, nice job on this lesson. The lead guitar, the one that you are not playing in the video has some timing issues and that avoids making the overall take tight. That repetitive pattern is fundamental for the song and need to be played with the right timing and groove to get a solid song. I noticed that you added some bass notes and chords in the last two sections (starting at 00:50). I think that it doesn't sound good, there are some timing and harmonization that appear that make the song complex and without air, while the style need to be simple and airy.