Original lesson: Metal Metrics 4 by Cosmin Lupu

Hey mate

This take is building up quite nicely as in respect to timing there are no big issues, but there are certain details which I'd like to point out:

- 0:18 - that chord should've been a little more delayed in execution - listen to the original take closely
- I think you are muting the strings a bit too much and thus, the sound is choked
- 0:39 and 0:43 work on that bending licks there, to play them correctly - the phrasing is not as in the original recording and the pitches are not there as well
- 0:51 - that bend should have the slide before it

Take care of these details and all should be well

Cosmin

Hi mate! Nice job on this take. Cosmin, the creator of this amazing lesson has already given your the details that you need to have in mind if you want to master this lesson. Keep on practising this one some more time and I'm sure you'll get a 10.

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Good take ! Cosmin has already spied the necessary elements that are missing from the take.. if you follow his advice it'll sound much smoother !

Hey Rammkin! Seems like Your busy lately with doing some huge practice Great to se another of Your takes Once again ?Nicely done job with only some details to fix. Guys already spotted some issues. I might only add that on the single notes palm muting seems like You depend a lot on the distortion type. I think You could play this part harder to het more "juice" from the sound. Anyway...good job!

Almost there, 7.25