Hi man! Great to find a new take of this one! You are working very hard and we can really note it. Congrats! Your technique is getting better and better. I have just some general comments about this one:
1. Your vibrato is now wide and strong. Be sure to le the note ring first and then add the vibrato, it must be a natural part of the note. That's why you also have to make it more regular. This will be achieved with more days of practice.
2. You are using more fingers movement than wrist movement with your right hand. You won't have problems with this lesson but that can bring problems if you want to play faster stuff. Have a look at this thread:
http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_fo...showtopic=428283. The overall take could sound more groovy, once you feel more comfortable with the techniques like bending and vibrato.
That's all! Keep on the good job!