I'm Sorry!! i have posted my take in the wrong lesson. The true lesson is Classic Punk: Ramones by Gabriel Leopardi.
Cosmin Lupu
May 29 2013, 08:58 AM
Hey mate!
Good take here - my only observations are the fact that you are rushing around 0:14 and the transition at 0:18 is muffled - since this is punk, maybe it's allowed?
Keep rocking!
Cosmin
Darius Wave
May 29 2013, 10:02 AM
Well done! I've only noticed some timming problem at 0:23-0:25 and some problems to handle palm muting but those are litle details. Good work
Gabriel Leopardi
May 30 2013, 03:46 PM
Hi man! Besides Cosmin and Darius comments, I would add that the overall lesson could be adjusted a bit to sound tighter. Concentrate on your timing and keep on practising! By the way it's a good take.
Fran
May 31 2013, 09:32 AM
Pass: 8
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