I think the tone is a little too distorted...You can hear the over-compression but as for the freq-range sounds nice
Bend at 0:10 is at too high pitch and 0:19 tapping should be played more precisely - try to use more harder punch from the right hands fingers. Also even though there is chorus effect I still feel like it's a bit out of tune (especially at 0:13 on the 3rd and 4th string). Nice take but gotta work on it some more to pass