Original lesson: Rock Rhythm with Triads by Joe Kataldo

Hi mates!!! Here is my attempt.

Hey man! I think that this one needs a bit more slow practice, focusing on tightness. You need to have more intention when playing it, but you are on the good way

Cosmin

Hi Alex! You are doing a good job with this lesson, you already learnt all the notes and chords not it's time to practice each part slowly to be able to play it 100% tight. Your timing needs a strong adjustment on this one. Keep on the hard work!

Timing is the case here - especially about 0:26. Maybe try some wider, more regular right hand movements? As fot the short solo part seems to be ok. I like the tuning precision. Also about 0:28 seems like some unwanted noise from the higher strings cuts through while You play muted 6th string. You can lay your left hand first finger to mute those strings while You play 6th Anyway...well done cause it pleasant to listen and those details will make it sound tight and powerful All best my friend!

Almost there, 7.3