Original lesson: Hendrix Meets Sayce by Denes Nagy

plan on doing a sececond take, after watching and listening i feel my vibrato could have been better, and feels a bit rushed around 15 seconds in

Hello David

I think your take is already a very promising one, but indeed you could work a bit more on the vibrato, to make it wider in some points

Keep rocking!

Cosmin

Good job man! I like your energy and tone on this one!
I have nothing to add to Cosmin's comments so keep on rocking.

Nice take! My suggestion would be to work on the timing in order to avoid rushing. Playing slightly behind the beat will help you find the "pocket" and groove. Try to clean up your tone a bit by lowering on the gain. This lesson requires sharp crunchy strat sound which is relatively clean.

Practice this a bit more and you should get it. Focus on the timing and vibrato. Also, it would be good to isolate parts with double stops as they might get tricky with added vibrato.

Pass: 8