Hey Michael, great to see another take from you again
Your vibrato and bending is increasing in its impressiveness - good work !
The key element for me that was compromised was the timing.. I would probably put my money on it happening because of the concentration you put into each lick. Sometimes, you get moments of having to quickly mentally compute what the next lick is.. and in the time it takes to happen, we're behind the beat. I could be wrong but it does happen a lot.
On the other side of the coin, the sliding phrases towards the end were a bit too rushed. So, all in all, your technique is getting better but the timing suffered on this one and because it's a very noticeable and important element of music I've had to be a bit stricter than I'd like to be
But I would definitely take this take as a postive though