This is a good attempt but needs more work to make it sound precise and controlled. Although this solo sounds simple in terms of technique it actually calls for great accuracy and control. It requires all of a guitarist's arsenal of bending, vibrato, timing and feel.
2 areas I would focus on first would be to make the bends sound even and controlled.. the other would be to focus on the right hand synchonising better with the left.. not just for articulating the phrases but also for preventing unwanted string noise. You'll get there !