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Mar 21 2009, 07:49 PM
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I figured i would get in on this... heres a take i made a week ago, im trying to correct my timing issues and the audio recording problems... heres the original https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/phrygi...loing-beginner/
This post has been edited by skennington: Mar 29 2009, 04:54 PM --------------------  |
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Mar 21 2009, 08:26 PM
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Rhythm placement - 3
Cleanness - 3,5 Feel - 3,5 Posture - 3,5 Sound - 3,8 Well there are lot of things you need to work on. First your vibrato is very weak and needs to be consistent. This is noticable when you're playing longer notes. Some lines are out of time. They should be right on the beat. Try practicing with metronome. I would like to see much more control and confidence. I would also advise less distortion or if you're using software modeler or a POD then try different amp model. -------------------- Check out my <a href="https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/instructor/Emir-Hot" target="_blank">Instructor profile</a>
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Mar 22 2009, 03:14 AM
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Rhythm placement - 3
Cleanness - 3,5 Feel - 3,5 Posture - 3,5 Sound - 3,5 Some problems here, but it's the vibrato that comes across as needing most work. The timing was mostly ok, but it gets a bit sloppy in the 2nd half. The sound comes across as a bit sharp in the recording. -------------------- Guitars: Schecter Stiletto Classic, Jackson SLSMG, Ibanez RG-380 Japan, Gibson Les Paul Studio
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Mar 24 2009, 05:54 PM
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Rhythm placement - 3,5
Cleanness - 3,5 Feel - 3 Posture - 4 Sound - 2,5 sound could be much better. Try to tweak it so you get a more smoother sound, and roll off the presence a bit, so it doesn't sound to harsh in the top end. Nice balanced sound is half of the job. -------------------- - Ivan's Video Chat Lesson Notes HERE
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Mar 28 2009, 03:17 PM
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Rhythm placement - 4
Cleanness - 3,5 Feel - 3,5 Posture - 4 Sound - 3 I gave 4 for timing cause it was very nice considering your overall level, well done! However you should work more on your vibrato, make it sound more natural, sound was also too sharp, I would cut some treble there or som. Appreciated effort, keep it up.  -------------------- Youtube
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Mar 28 2009, 11:09 PM
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Rhythm placement 4
Cleanness 3.5 Feel 3 Posture 4 Sound 2.5 The take is ok and will be perfect soon with a bit of practice. As Muris said you have to practice your vibrato to make the solo sound with more feeling. However the most important thing to fix here is your guitar sound. You'll never feel comfortable with this sound. I don't know what you used but try to change the settings. 
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Mar 28 2009, 11:18 PM
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Rhythm placement - 3.5
Cleanness - 3 Feel - 3.5 Posture - 4 Sound - 3 -------------------- |
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Mar 29 2009, 12:01 AM
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Keep diggin John, you can clean this one up for sure! 68.5% is your average atm for this lesson.
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